pointless. I cannot fathom what I'm supposed to take from this, but I strive to be fair and write more than a sentence as well as never coming off as just hateful. So I'll do my best, here goes. Way to short, and not nearly enough dialog. I'm not sure If there is some mystical quality to pancakes that I'm not getting that makes them funny just by telling someone to eat them? Lets face it, it's very difficult here to have anything positive to say so to keep from sounding just mean or cruel I will say this. I am a fan of stop motion animation, when Its done tastefully and some thought is put into it. Bottom line, maybe try making some story, giving your characters some background, maybe some personality. Something more than just two guys sitting there yelling about pancakes. Better luck next time.